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Latest Story Feedback

Diana's Stars
A chilling story which I actually found quite scary. With its grim subject matter and dark setting it highlights human nature at it's worst. The descriptive quality added to the story's impact as its clear and sometimes gruesome imagery have made this story a 'must-read'. Highly original, it would be nice to see this story and what what leads up to this chilling climax expanded to a novella or novel.

I look forward to reading more from this author

Babz B

The Magicians
Excellent story Alan.  Enjoyed from beginning to end.  Really liked the plot.  Not too many characters and enough of a hook at the beginning to keep the reader interested and intrigued.  Tom

Tom

The Angel With Whiskers
Very nicely done Babz.  Not my usual genre, but I had to finish it - a sign of a good story...  Must read your others. 

Tom

Christine's Dream
A good story and well developed though I would have to say a reduction in character numbers would have improved it for me.  Having said that, it was a story within a story so that would have been restrictive on the author.  Nice work. 

Tom Benson

Potato Woman
An interesting character story.  Following the life of Pat a woman brought up to hate peeling potatoes.  The writer really seems to get into the hatred this person has for the humble spud being a redirection of her hatred for her mother.  It is a little long for my liking and a lot of unnecessary repetition but I found it enjoyable and could sympathise with her.  Well done.

June Fenwick

Summer of 69
Just read the above story by BJ Coupe. It's a little unusual but I like the dialogue and the plot.  There are a lot of dreamlike stories around and unless they are exceptional they become boring.  I think as a short story it works and the fact that she is getting drunk at the time allows it to happen.

June Fenwick

Summer of 69
This is my first visit to your website - I got your address from Writing Magazine.  I like the concept of submitting stories for others opinions as it can be very helpful to get outsiders view and not just those of your friends and families.  Keep it up.

June Fenwick